My heart shakes for you,
Your eyes drill that firey screw,
as my heart beats its last, only for you,
As my soul rages in that tempest filled sea,
Gasping for Air, yet you held my heart key,
still, you continue to flee…
My heart shattered, My soul forever scarred,
feeling burnt till smoldering and charred,
desperately trying to regrow my heart from a single shard.
Emptiness Consuming,
My Suffering is Corruption Blooming,
With the Seeds of Corruption Forever Looming…
Yet Hope within My Heart,
desperately needing a forced Restart,
which only time can impart…
Slowly growing over my soul scar,
all I can do is apply tar,
To fix the road of my emotions, to patch my eternal scar…
An interesting form. Very full of emotion. The capitalized words give it an old fashioned feel which I find distracting. You can use the same words without capitalizing to bring it into the 21st century.
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Thak you, I definitely apprecaite the Critique. I will have to take that into consideration going forward 🙂
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